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जय श्री राम


Designed By: Ankit Parikh

46 comments:

Shreyansh Shah said...

Ankit tari friend to mind blowing writer 6 yaar... This is one is really touchy nice job Sis

Rishita Mishra said...

This poem is so touching specially last portion I wish smile remains always on didi's face

Rakesh Iyer said...

I'm falling so deep in memories its really very touching.
May god bless you both today and always

Aakriti Jain said...

In the end we have to learn a lesson, accept it and move on life goes on we can't sit at one place by remembering all such things again n again..... If its reality then I wish she gets her friend back

Avni Malhotra said...

Shweta di you know what the grand inspiration for a writer is touching one's soul and for me you did it. You have capability to become a tremendous writer. Somewhere I can feel your presence in this well-structured poem and well-designed image. May Almighty shower his blessings on you

Kinjal Gohil said...

Whether its just a thought or feeling I can feel weight of words and I think Ankit you felt it too that's why we can see underline. Shweta now its like intoxication of your poems.

Bhaumik Kapadia said...

One of the best poems I've ever read Truly you are a good writer sister... I wish aapke true friends hamesha aapke sath rahe aur aap unke sath.... ankit thanks for sharing her beautiful collection with all of us

Aayush Shah said...

Till now all the poems are like stories but this one is different somewhere it touch me god bless you madam keep writing and sharing

Aarohi Shah said...

Shweta sis your writing isn't ambiguous. Readers understands your poems, feelings, thoughts so well and that's the important thing for a poet

Kavya Parikh said...

Its very very touchy seems like its based on actuality

Pratik Patel said...

I agree with the quotation pic you've added bro.. We can't sit with eyes full of tears and wishing all d day like hope I could and all..... Finally we have to move on the show of life must go on

Anshul Purohit said...

I think someone shouldn't attach with anyone so closely unless the other one doesn't accept you as a best friend or life partner.... For me, if someone drops you after treating you as a friend then he/she has seen you as a thing not as a person... In some cases its also possible that person treats everyone in a same way but one thinks something different and gets attached with him/her then that's his/her prob. so 2 sides of coin anyways its a nice poem well done ma'am

Shloka said...

I think this one is felt by your heart di... Its hard to wait around for Something you know might never happen, but its harder to give up when you know Its Everything YOU WANT ... ur poems touch my heart u know they make me smile sometimes, fill my heart with tears sometimes and sometimes it makes me crazy you are a WONDERFUL WRITER love you di may god bless you dear JSK

Nazmin Saeed said...

Ye poem dil ko chhu gayi bhaiyjaan aapke liye to har waqt dua ke hath uthte rehte hai par kuch bahen ke liye bhi aaj..... Khuda meri dua qabool karey aapko shweta bahen har kadam pe kamyab rakhey, tamam maqsad me madad farmaiye aur mehfus rakhey aur hamesha aapko khush rakhey Ameen..

Siddharth said...

Something is there in this poem that caught my eye I think so far one of the best poems on this blog

Amrita said...

Shwetaji tusi bade sweet ho aapki poems to sidhe dil pe jake lagti hai changa ji sat sri akal

Dr Samarth said...

You've expressed your feelings very well it goes straight to my heart

Faruq said...

Masha Allah bahut khoob khuda aapko hamesha khush rakhey

Dr Priti Parikh said...

Its one of the poems that touch my heart. After a long time I've read poem like this. जय श्री कृष्ण :) keep smiling Shweta di

Avkansh said...

Looks like its a story of author's soul

Grace Wilson said...

There is a sadness in this poem yet it's still so beautiful!! And, image too. Thanks Dear Ankit for sharing it

Harshil Parikh said...

I think its written for healing.... It has some sad feeling also HOPE....

Dr Charul said...

I think this poet is saving her grace through writing.... Its very touching and thanks ankit for sharing

Tania Trivedi said...

Didi, your poetry so resonates

Priya said...

Deep Emotions :[

Mohit said...

True people change too like time

Dr Dipal Shah said...

<3 sharing.... I can see pain in this poem clearly

Olivia said...

Dear you are a versatile poet. This one makes me feel sad whereas another poem makes me feel to so happy. And, one more poem put me into a dream world

Kritika Chauhan said...

Sad....Hope....Deep....I love this....

Suhani Sinha said...

True lines

Archan Shah said...

Interesting poem

Harshita Gupta said...

I agree with the title of the poem and quote written in the 1st picture.... I think people come in our life for a reason and when that reason completes they leave us and go on their own way that's the rule of the universe! So stick with one and only GOD and his true devotees. Somewhere your poems touch my soul didi specially this one and the one that reminds me of my best bro, best friend.... My hearties wishes to you; May Supreme Authority bless you Shweta di. You are lucky di to have him in your friends list so he is too R8 bro? :D

Ritu said...

Something is coming in my mind right now.... Shweta don't take my comment personally.... Its not just about true friendship, true love, true relationship & a true heart but just a relationship filled with a fog of infatuation.... People come across difficult points in our lives & 'we decide the grass could be greener' "so sappy"

Maria said...

Dear you may not know where life’s road will lead you. But keep moving. God is walking with you.

Dhruv Bhatt said...

This is really true.... Well Said madam

Chahat said...

God is in the midst of your storms and he will carry you when you feel faint & cannot walk. This one is really touchy and I'd like to say one more time "God Bless You didi" Luv and Hugs for you

Kush said...

So true letting go of someone I was in a kind of situation so I know its really tough. May the angles protect u di… May the sadness forget and may Shri Krishna always bless u.

Harsh Modi said...

Heart touching.... Full of Sentiments ... I wish you a good future full of happiness

Dr Nikhil Mehta said...

Today even best friends grow apart then what can we say about people!? Nice poem

The author said...

Thanks everyone.Ritu i agree with you. maybe we fail to see the truth. and thanks everyone for reading it and putting your thoughts to words, all your wishes thanks a lot. bhaiya i just cant thank you enough. its amazing and lovely thanks a lot.

Mohit Bhardwaj said...

Touching one :)

Manthan said...

Its truly touching one

Drashti Parikh said...

Faith makes: Yesterday a stepping stone, today a new beginning, tomorrow a limitless possibility!

Aleena said...

I agree with quote pic and ankit I still remember one sentence from your mails which is "Love and Fear are the two most common emotions in your life that can make you strong or break you into pieces" I can't forget that mail and those days ever

Jolina said...

True that

Ryan said...

That's right