In the end we have to learn a lesson, accept it and move on life goes on we can't sit at one place by remembering all such things again n again..... If its reality then I wish she gets her friend back
Shweta di you know what the grand inspiration for a writer is touching one's soul and for me you did it. You have capability to become a tremendous writer. Somewhere I can feel your presence in this well-structured poem and well-designed image. May Almighty shower his blessings on you
Whether its just a thought or feeling I can feel weight of words and I think Ankit you felt it too that's why we can see underline. Shweta now its like intoxication of your poems.
One of the best poems I've ever read Truly you are a good writer sister... I wish aapke true friends hamesha aapke sath rahe aur aap unke sath.... ankit thanks for sharing her beautiful collection with all of us
I agree with the quotation pic you've added bro.. We can't sit with eyes full of tears and wishing all d day like hope I could and all..... Finally we have to move on the show of life must go on
I think someone shouldn't attach with anyone so closely unless the other one doesn't accept you as a best friend or life partner.... For me, if someone drops you after treating you as a friend then he/she has seen you as a thing not as a person... In some cases its also possible that person treats everyone in a same way but one thinks something different and gets attached with him/her then that's his/her prob. so 2 sides of coin anyways its a nice poem well done ma'am
I think this one is felt by your heart di... Its hard to wait around for Something you know might never happen, but its harder to give up when you know Its Everything YOU WANT ... ur poems touch my heart u know they make me smile sometimes, fill my heart with tears sometimes and sometimes it makes me crazy you are a WONDERFUL WRITER love you di may god bless you dear JSK
Ye poem dil ko chhu gayi bhaiyjaan aapke liye to har waqt dua ke hath uthte rehte hai par kuch bahen ke liye bhi aaj..... Khuda meri dua qabool karey aapko shweta bahen har kadam pe kamyab rakhey, tamam maqsad me madad farmaiye aur mehfus rakhey aur hamesha aapko khush rakhey Ameen..
I agree with the title of the poem and quote written in the 1st picture.... I think people come in our life for a reason and when that reason completes they leave us and go on their own way that's the rule of the universe! So stick with one and only GOD and his true devotees. Somewhere your poems touch my soul didi specially this one and the one that reminds me of my best bro, best friend.... My hearties wishes to you; May Supreme Authority bless you Shweta di. You are lucky di to have him in your friends list so he is too R8 bro? :D
Something is coming in my mind right now.... Shweta don't take my comment personally.... Its not just about true friendship, true love, true relationship & a true heart but just a relationship filled with a fog of infatuation.... People come across difficult points in our lives & 'we decide the grass could be greener' "so sappy"
God is in the midst of your storms and he will carry you when you feel faint & cannot walk. This one is really touchy and I'd like to say one more time "God Bless You didi" Luv and Hugs for you
So true letting go of someone I was in a kind of situation so I know its really tough. May the angles protect u di… May the sadness forget and may Shri Krishna always bless u.
Thanks everyone.Ritu i agree with you. maybe we fail to see the truth. and thanks everyone for reading it and putting your thoughts to words, all your wishes thanks a lot. bhaiya i just cant thank you enough. its amazing and lovely thanks a lot.
I agree with quote pic and ankit I still remember one sentence from your mails which is "Love and Fear are the two most common emotions in your life that can make you strong or break you into pieces" I can't forget that mail and those days ever
Hello Folks... I am Ankit From India... Hmm... Well, I am Jolly, Modest, Sharing, Talkative, Friendly, Loving, Intelligent, Confident, Busy Bug, Kind, Polite, Sporty, Committed, Hard Worker, Religious, Helpful, Trustworthy, Liberal Up To My Own Conditions & Boarders.
46 comments:
Ankit tari friend to mind blowing writer 6 yaar... This is one is really touchy nice job Sis
This poem is so touching specially last portion I wish smile remains always on didi's face
I'm falling so deep in memories its really very touching.
May god bless you both today and always
In the end we have to learn a lesson, accept it and move on life goes on we can't sit at one place by remembering all such things again n again..... If its reality then I wish she gets her friend back
Shweta di you know what the grand inspiration for a writer is touching one's soul and for me you did it. You have capability to become a tremendous writer. Somewhere I can feel your presence in this well-structured poem and well-designed image. May Almighty shower his blessings on you
Whether its just a thought or feeling I can feel weight of words and I think Ankit you felt it too that's why we can see underline. Shweta now its like intoxication of your poems.
One of the best poems I've ever read Truly you are a good writer sister... I wish aapke true friends hamesha aapke sath rahe aur aap unke sath.... ankit thanks for sharing her beautiful collection with all of us
Till now all the poems are like stories but this one is different somewhere it touch me god bless you madam keep writing and sharing
Shweta sis your writing isn't ambiguous. Readers understands your poems, feelings, thoughts so well and that's the important thing for a poet
Its very very touchy seems like its based on actuality
I agree with the quotation pic you've added bro.. We can't sit with eyes full of tears and wishing all d day like hope I could and all..... Finally we have to move on the show of life must go on
I think someone shouldn't attach with anyone so closely unless the other one doesn't accept you as a best friend or life partner.... For me, if someone drops you after treating you as a friend then he/she has seen you as a thing not as a person... In some cases its also possible that person treats everyone in a same way but one thinks something different and gets attached with him/her then that's his/her prob. so 2 sides of coin anyways its a nice poem well done ma'am
I think this one is felt by your heart di... Its hard to wait around for Something you know might never happen, but its harder to give up when you know Its Everything YOU WANT ... ur poems touch my heart u know they make me smile sometimes, fill my heart with tears sometimes and sometimes it makes me crazy you are a WONDERFUL WRITER love you di may god bless you dear JSK
Ye poem dil ko chhu gayi bhaiyjaan aapke liye to har waqt dua ke hath uthte rehte hai par kuch bahen ke liye bhi aaj..... Khuda meri dua qabool karey aapko shweta bahen har kadam pe kamyab rakhey, tamam maqsad me madad farmaiye aur mehfus rakhey aur hamesha aapko khush rakhey Ameen..
Something is there in this poem that caught my eye I think so far one of the best poems on this blog
Shwetaji tusi bade sweet ho aapki poems to sidhe dil pe jake lagti hai changa ji sat sri akal
You've expressed your feelings very well it goes straight to my heart
Masha Allah bahut khoob khuda aapko hamesha khush rakhey
Its one of the poems that touch my heart. After a long time I've read poem like this. जय श्री कृष्ण :) keep smiling Shweta di
Looks like its a story of author's soul
There is a sadness in this poem yet it's still so beautiful!! And, image too. Thanks Dear Ankit for sharing it
I think its written for healing.... It has some sad feeling also HOPE....
I think this poet is saving her grace through writing.... Its very touching and thanks ankit for sharing
Didi, your poetry so resonates
Deep Emotions :[
True people change too like time
<3 sharing.... I can see pain in this poem clearly
Dear you are a versatile poet. This one makes me feel sad whereas another poem makes me feel to so happy. And, one more poem put me into a dream world
Sad....Hope....Deep....I love this....
True lines
Interesting poem
I agree with the title of the poem and quote written in the 1st picture.... I think people come in our life for a reason and when that reason completes they leave us and go on their own way that's the rule of the universe! So stick with one and only GOD and his true devotees. Somewhere your poems touch my soul didi specially this one and the one that reminds me of my best bro, best friend.... My hearties wishes to you; May Supreme Authority bless you Shweta di. You are lucky di to have him in your friends list so he is too R8 bro? :D
Something is coming in my mind right now.... Shweta don't take my comment personally.... Its not just about true friendship, true love, true relationship & a true heart but just a relationship filled with a fog of infatuation.... People come across difficult points in our lives & 'we decide the grass could be greener' "so sappy"
Dear you may not know where life’s road will lead you. But keep moving. God is walking with you.
This is really true.... Well Said madam
God is in the midst of your storms and he will carry you when you feel faint & cannot walk. This one is really touchy and I'd like to say one more time "God Bless You didi" Luv and Hugs for you
So true letting go of someone I was in a kind of situation so I know its really tough. May the angles protect u di… May the sadness forget and may Shri Krishna always bless u.
Heart touching.... Full of Sentiments ... I wish you a good future full of happiness
Today even best friends grow apart then what can we say about people!? Nice poem
Thanks everyone.Ritu i agree with you. maybe we fail to see the truth. and thanks everyone for reading it and putting your thoughts to words, all your wishes thanks a lot. bhaiya i just cant thank you enough. its amazing and lovely thanks a lot.
Touching one :)
Its truly touching one
Faith makes: Yesterday a stepping stone, today a new beginning, tomorrow a limitless possibility!
I agree with quote pic and ankit I still remember one sentence from your mails which is "Love and Fear are the two most common emotions in your life that can make you strong or break you into pieces" I can't forget that mail and those days ever
True that
That's right
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