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12 comments:

Nazmin Saeed said...

Heart-Breaking Poem... Mere pass koi alfaz nahi hai Shweta didi aur bhaiyajaan aap ne bahot achi tarike se designing ki hai aap ki efforts dikh rahi hai khuda kabhi aap dono ko aesa nazara na dikhaye

Chintan said...

Dil hai to dard bhi to hoga
Dard hai to fir dil bhi hoga
Mausam badalte hi rehte....

Aakriti Jain said...

One wrong person in anyone's life hurt a lot

Kavya Parikh said...

Author this is not just a poem instead so many girls' reality... I wanna ask you one thing is it just based on your thoughts or you wrote it after seeing someone's situation practically?

Kavya Parikh said...

And hey bhai its extremely perfect designing for this poem hats off to you

Olivia said...

I always remember one quote & I'll remember it till the end which is "Don't trust too much, don't hope too much, don't LOVE too much, because that TOO MUCH can Hurt SO MUCH.... Once again a great combination of poem and picture

Avni Malhotra said...

I'd like to give full ratings to this poem because its very touchy and almost brings tears in my eyes coz I know still somewhere same thing is occurring and not just only in villages but also in cities....

Kinjal Gohil said...

Very sad poem it really touched my heart

Aarohi Shah said...

This is not just a poem but reality!! a bad side of society in which we all are living... Specially in villages in poor family husbands just sit in their homes and drink rum and ended up being extremely drunk then they hit their wives badly even though they are the only source of income.... Even now days its common in well educated families too.... I'm in journalist field so I know that husband hit his wife on the very first night of their wedding how rude how bad how cheap I dont have words... in the beginning he and his family appear so nice but only girl knows after wedding how much they are in reality!! and normally they dont prefer to say that to her parents coz she doesn't want to see her parents sad, make them feel guilty; a girl's heart, hats off to all the women.... In fact on the wedding day Groom comes wedding pavilion drunk

Shloka said...

Di I dnt know ki aap ne aese hi ye poem likhi hai ya koi situation ko mind mein rakh kar ya kuch padh kar whatever but it really touched my heart... I love this poem because its true!! I'm sure that this poem is gonna grip readers

Amrita said...

I'm speechless

Sneha said...

Hey Shweta dear this is so sad poem you are an amazing poet believe me.... I love this poem its exactly what I see in news & read in newspapers and how those girls feel who were/are in such a pitiable condition... Ankit I have no words you are tremendous designer your choice is extra ordinary.....